UMA- IELTS Essay-Writing

Some Exercises for IAWT2 (4) + (5)
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Previous 3 Sentences

1. It is certainly true that the use of private cars has greatly increased, but it is also true that not all the effects of the increase are positive.
2. A common criticism of the increase in the number of private cars on the road is that firstly, it causes air pollution.
3. This is because cars emit exhaust, which contains Carbon Dioxide, and which is the cause of air pollution.

Sentence 4

(1) [Since / Therefore / Although] the increase in the number of cars (2) [mean / means / meaning] the increase in the (3) [number / amount] of CO2 in the air, (4) [this / that / thus] further causes people to get respiratory diseases.

Sentence 5

(1) [Other / Another / The other] objection to the increase in the number of cars on the road (2) [is / are] the higher incidence of traffic jams. (3) [Because / Because of / As a result], much valuable time (4) [is wasting / is wasted / wastes] on the road.

Answer to Some Exercises for IAWT2 (3)
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Following Sentences 1 and 2.

3.
(1) [That is / This is / While] because cars emit exhaust, which (2) [contain / contains / containing] Carbon Dioxide, and (3) [it is / that is / which is] the cause of air pollution.

1. + 3.
That is:
points backward to something
already mentioned; indicates a mental
distance in time or with the speaker;
used to clarify a point (i.e.)

This is:
Reference PN 'this': Referring back to Sentence 2.

Which is:
Relative Clause

While:
Subordinating Conjunction of Concession/Contrast Sub-Clause

1. Answer: This is
3. Answer: which is

2. Answer: Agreement
exhaust, which contains

This is because cars emit exhaust, which contains Carbon Dioxide, and which is the cause of air pollution.
(which......, and which.....)

Previous Sentences

1. It is certainly true that the use of private cars has greatly increased,
but it is also true that not all the effects of the increase are positive.
2. A common criticism of the increase in the number of private cars on the road is that firstly, it causes air pollution.
3. This is because cars emit exhaust, which contains Carbon Dioxide, and which is the cause of air pollution.

Some Exercises for IAWT2 (3)
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3.
(1) [That is / This is / While] because cars emit exhaust which (2) [contain / contains / containing] Carbon Dioxide, and (3) [it is / that is / which is] the cause of air pollution.

Answer Key to Some Exercises for IAWT2 (2)
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Choose the most appropriate word/phrase in the square brackets to form the correct sentence. Why is it the correct choice?

2.
(1) [A / The / Zero article] common criticism of the increase (2)[ in / of / by] the number of private cars on the road (3)[ is that / are that ] (4 ) [at first / First / firstly,] (5) [it / they ] (6) [cause / causes] air pollution.

1. A - indefinite article
A + (common) criticism
A common criticism of + N
A common academic expression
used in Opinion Essays to
introduce an oposing viewpoint
Full expression:
A common criticism of + N + is +
'that' Clause
​ A more formal/academic use
meaning:
​ "Many people object to X because
of + N."
​ The word "common" implies that it
is a widespread, recognized
objection.
​ Can be used to set up a
counter-argument followed by
'However,'
​
​2. Preposition - in
Common Phrasal Verb
'increase in' = 'increase' where?
Complex Noun Phrase
NP + Prepositional Phrase
an increase in the number of + N
Academic transformation of
"Lots more cars"

3. is (Linking Verb) + 'that' Clause
Subject + is + 'that' Clause

4. 'at first' - for describing an initial state or feeling that changed later; to contrasts the beginning of a situation with what happened afterward.
'First' -for listing points in chronological sequences as in recipes or instructions.
'firstly,' - for listing arguments in formal essays, to indicate the first (supporting) idea/argument in a list, usually found in Body Paragraphs.

​ 5. PN - it
referring to 'the increase'

6. SVA - causes
Subject - 'it'

Answer:
A common criticism of the increase in the number of private vehicles on the road is that firstly, it causes air pollution.

Teaching/Learning Writing နဲ့ပတ်သက်လို့

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Some Exercises for IAWT2 (2)
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Choose the most appropriate word/phrase in the square brackets to form the correct sentence. Wht is it the correct choice?

2.
(1) [A / The / Zero article] common criticism of the increase (2)[ in / of / by] the number of private cars on the road (3)[ is that / are that ] (4 ) [at first / First / firstly,] (5) [it / they ] (6) [cause / causes] air pollution.

Answer to Some Exercises for IAWT2 (1)
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Choose the most appropriate word/phrase
in the square brackets to form the correct sentence. Why is it the correct choice?

1. (1) [There is / It is / While] certainly true (2)[of / which / that] the use of private cars (3)[has / have] greatly increased (4)[full stop / comma / semi-colon] (5) [But / but that is / but it is] also true that not all the (6) [affects / effects] of the increase (7) [is / are] positive.

1.
1. There is = expresses existence of something
e.g.,.There is ample evidence to prove that...
It is = indicates opinion / attitude
It is + (Adv) + Adj + 'that' Clause
Formal use: e.g.,
Many people think that...
It is generally believed that....
While = Dependent Clause Marker DCM
Subordinating Conjunction
To show Concession / Contrast
'that' = conjunction / connector / connects the
Sub Clause to the Main Clause
It is certainly true + that +
The use of private cars has greatly increased.

2. 'that' Noun Clause
'that' + Sentence

3. SVA = Subject-Verb Agreement

4. 2 Sentences combined with a Coordinating
Conjunction 'but', which requires a comma.
Sentence 1, Conjunction + Sentence 2
'fanboys' coordinating conjunctions
for / and / nor / but / or / yet / so

5. A full stop would be inaccurate here as the
whole sentence is a Compound Sentence
consisting of 2 Independent Clauses connected
by a coordinating Conjunction 'but'.
In the same way, a semi-colon would be out of
place.
Never start a sentence with And, But, So
Formal-Academic Rule
Parallelism: same structure repeated:
'It is true that'.....'it is (also) true that...'

6. Verb and Noun
affects // effects

7. SVA

Answer:

It is certainly true that the use of private cars
has greatly increased, but it is also true that
not all the effects of the increase are positive.

It is certainly true that
the use of private cars
has greatly increased,
but
it is also true that
not all the effects of the increase
are positive.

'It is certainly true that.... , but it is also true that...'
structure is used to show opposing ideas/situations. It is similar to
'While/Although..... , ........' Structure.

Some Exercises for IAWT2 (1 - 11)
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Choose the most appropriate word/phrase
in the square brackets to form the correct sentence. Why is it the correct choice?

1. (1) [There is / It is / While] certainly true (2)[of / which / that] the use of private cars (3)[has / have] greatly increased (4)[full stop / comma / semi-colon] (5) [But / but that is / but it is] also true that not all the (6) [affects / effects] of the increase (7) [is / are] positive.

မျက်နှာကြီးကအရမ်းတည်တာပဲလို့ပြောတတ်ကြတယ်။

မတည်လို့ဘယ်လိုနေရမှာလဲလို့။

ခပ်တည်တည်ပဲ လို့။

I'm serious. I don't stand nonsense လို့။

ပေါတောတောတွေလာမလုပ်နဲ့ လို့။

I ပဲလုပ်မယ် လို့ ။ Heee.....

Thank you all for attending my presentation at Times City yesterday.
Hope you weren't excruciatingly bored.
My gratitude especially goes to MmTESOL and MOE.
Keep up the good work, guys (oops, sorry. Must learn to be more formal) my dear esteemed colleagues.